In our technological world, the number of new inventions has been increasing. Please make an example with its impact on our life, and explain if it is beneficial or not.
Recently, the phenomenon of the number of new inventions and its corresponding impacrs has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of remarkable innovations is highly beneficial, such issue is regarding thoroughly both constructive nad positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that making someting new can be a plus and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, Increasing modern inventions can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of innovators as well as their careers are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience I performed an academic experiment which discovered making the life easy. Thus, the beneficial ramifications of both disciveries and up-to-date studies apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, the technological world might increase the consequences of some developments. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of human beings could relate to this reality that the demerit of living better pertain to different attitudes. As a tangible example, some scientific researches undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted the downside of the influences is correlated negatively with the high explaination.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of the new technology far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of the enhancing of inovations prove the significance of modern countries but also pinpoint the possible implications.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64462809917 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2842688216 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665289256198 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3595420923 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.181818182 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19229353335 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616860184526 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472221314868 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949516874997 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263270095447 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.86 8.32886699507 130% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64462809917 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2842688216 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665289256198 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3595420923 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.181818182 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19229353335 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616860184526 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472221314868 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949516874997 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263270095447 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.86 8.32886699507 130% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.