Do you think students who go to university and pay full fees should earn higher salaries than those who do not go to university?
Recently, the phenomenon of going to universities and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of graduates is highly beneficial, such issue is regarding thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that successful students can be a plus and I will analyze that through this essay.
From a social standpoint, paying full fees can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of an increasing income as well as higher salaries are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, I performed an academic experiment which discovered great opportunities. Thus, the beneficial ramifications of both an academic study and high demend jobs apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, making more money might increase the consequences of the satisfying payment. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of getting educational degree could relate to this reality that the demerits of educating pertain to obtaining the best job. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted the downside of the alumnia is correlated negatively with the employment. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of this attitude.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of good money far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of the employers prove the significance of employees but also pinpoint possible implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.548 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19020751676 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6395913967 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.583333333 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111323209617 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317873655961 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453387474878 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0534583470322 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220499007132 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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