Problems with environmental pollution have become so serious that many countries are trying to solve these problems. Suggest possible solutions and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, environmental pollution are the most serious problems for many countries. Full effort and action have been done in order to fix this problems. There are several solutions adopted by common countries. Focused on research to change common products with green products, and socialized for the peoples how dangerous the pollution are.
Firstly, since the pollution are the common threat for civilization. Many countries has urges the green products program, the program that will change majority products with the new products that could not wreck the ozone. As can bee seen recently the ozone level in arctic and north pole becoming weak since the pollution took over the air in big countries, and this condition will make earth more heat than now in the future. A big contribution of pollution are supported by cars and fabrics. Finding another alternatives solution to change petrol such as gas and electric are highly recommended.
Secondly, by keep announcing the dangerous effect of pollution, will build people consideration higher. People will learn by themselves how avoid all possibility that can make the pollution problems become worst. Not only on individual daily activity this consideration applied , but also and their work environment. Furthermore, by planting the consideration of how dangerous pollution to the children, will build a better generation in the future.
However, due to the current situation. It just only rich countries are very aware for the pollution. Poor countries still not pay many attention to these problems, for the poor countries the wealthy of their people still on top priority.
In conclusion, in order to prevent the pollution become more seriously harm the ozone. The consideration of many countries with green programs are very important. Subtitutes common products with the green one and socialization are the solution.
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how dangerous the pollution are.
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Sentence: A big contribution of pollution are supported by cars and fabrics.
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Sentence: Finding another alternatives solution to change petrol such as gas and electric are highly recommended.
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Secondly, by keep announcing
Secondly, by keeping announcing
in order to prevent the pollution become more seriously harm the ozone.
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