City life and country life
City life and country life have many different things. First, certainly city is more modern than country with tall buildings, factories, companys and malls,... Live in city people can have a well spirital life because there are many commecical centers and entertainment centers. People are served with good services. Besides, people can have more changes to get a job with a high salary and good working condition. Futhermore, we can join in many big events that aern't hold in country. On the other hands, there are still many problems when we live in city. The first is pollution. The air, water, food are so dirty and dangerous because of factories and activities of human. City is noisier, more stressful and more compatitive than country. The cost of living is too expensive due to that everything must pay fee. So that if you don't have a good job and get a stable salary, your life in city will be more difficult. The next, as we know trafic is a big problem of all city, The roads are never free of crowds and vehicles especially in rush hours. City is more dangerous than country because we must face to face with many social evils for examples garbling, drug addition, theft, accidents,... One more thing that people in city isn't as friendly as people in country. It's easy to understand because most of them come from different places to works and find job. I think both country life and city life have advantages and disadvantages too. However, we must find the suitble ways to live better.
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Sentence: First, certainly city is more modern than country with tall buildings, factories, companys and malls,... Live in city people can have a well spirital life because there are many commecical centers and entertainment centers.
Error: spirital Suggestion: spiritual
Error: commecical Suggestion: commercial
Sentence: Futhermore, we can join in many big events that aern't hold in country.
Error: aern Suggestion: aren't
Sentence: City is noisier, more stressful and more compatitive than country.
Error: compatitive Suggestion: competitive
Sentence: The next, as we know trafic is a big problem of all city, The roads are never free of crowds and vehicles especially in rush hours.
Error: trafic Suggestion: traffic
Sentence: However, we must find the suitble ways to live better.
Error: suitble Suggestion: suitable
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Category: Good Excellent
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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