Do you think English will remain a global language despite globalization? Discuss you views with examples.
Nowadays, learning a foreign language at an early age has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether promoting children’s ability to know a foreign language is a reasonable decision or not?”. It is a widely held view that acquiring a new language is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that learning a foreign language for children plays a vital role in the world of cut-throat society. To put into consideration, I express several reasons why I support this idea. First and foremost is that learning other language contribute children to be reinforced their mental growth in order to study a wide variety of subjects. Secondly, it can be argued that this plan provides pupils the best job opportunity in the international companies in the future. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that students will be able to apply easily for studying in the overseas without any problem. A very tangible example to illustrate would be the international schools that children have this opportunity to educate with another language.
However, there is no doubt that the capability of speaking to a foreign language provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that students cannot concentrate on ether there mother tongue language or foreign language. Moreover, it is clear that acquiring another language may damage the accent, culture, and identity of students.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that learning a foreign language in order to make a relationship with other nations must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and the individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
- There are a lot of inventions nowadays, which invention do you think is more important in our day-to-day life. What are the benefits and detrimental effects of it? 88
- Mass media like TV, newspaper, and radio influence people, particularly young generation. Do you think it works as a pivot to shape the society? What is your opinion? 80
- Mass media like TV, newspaper and radio influence people, particularly young generation. Do you think it works as a pivot to shape the society? What is your opinion? 80
- In many countries, children are engaged in different kinds of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong. Others consider it as a valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion? 85
- There are a lot of inventions nowadays, which invention do you think is more important in our day-to-day life. What are the benefits and detrimental effects of it? 88
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ign language at an early age has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nity to educate with another language. However, there is no doubt that the capa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, in addition, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 310.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24516129032 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0201474008 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577419354839 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 379.143842365 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0613983014 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.076923077 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0891544144011 0.242375264174 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334845549905 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0225939723063 0.071462118173 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568261892488 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123289449054 0.0609392437508 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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