art is considered an essential part of all culture the word however these days fever and we were people appreciate art and turn their focus of Science and technology and business why do you think that what could be done to encourage more people to take interest arts
art is being essential part of life, stone age but nowadays people have much interest in Science and Technology because our people things about the future and every person 1 emphasize on business to secure their future.
there are many reason why should have more interesting science because every people think about the future even they are younger adult photo think for create a bright and secure future they think that the business is very indispensable for human without money they do not sustain life.
Art is it being essential part of life government should compulsory give permission on schools or colleges for discusses about the art with students. They must reach to artistic places which are regarding related to culture suggest Punjabi Haveli that time.
In conclusion vishal the government should refer to public for Singh artistic place and the people do not forget the culture decide the business is also important for everyone but similarly culture is much important because it has create strong bonding of people with culture
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Art
art is being essential part of life, stone ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... on business to secure their future. there are many reason why should have more i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess to secure their future. there are many reason why should have more interes...
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Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
...ulture is much important because it has create strong bonding of people with culture
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, similarly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 171.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15204678363 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34315452035 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 176.041082164 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8180492423 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.2 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247642976337 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133623978287 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701123718887 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156458697662 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503959371475 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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