In a war of ideas, it is people who get killed”. Does a common man suffer from a group’s ideology? Express your opinion, and support the same with reasons and examples.
Nowadays, expressing your idea freely has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether, in a war of idea, it is reasonable to kill people or not?”. It is a widely held view that having a freedom of expression in the society is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that the right of citing your idea without killing by the government plays a vital role in the society. To put into consideration, I express several reasons why I support this subject. First and foremost is that in the majority of nations people are not allowed express their idea, and subsequently arrested for political crimes or are tortured severely. Secondly, it can be argued that some countries try to limit the rights of people and impose tougher regulations while citizens are reluctant to follow their politics and in some cases, they are obtained death penalties. In addition to this information, a very tangible example to illustrate would be North Korea that individuals deprive using the Internet and cannot to interact other countries.
However, there is no doubt that killing people for stating ideas provides people with various positive points. It should be taken into account that advocates think that group’s ideology misleads the communities and leads to damaging consequences.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that the freedom of expression of each nation must be taken into consideration and they should be free to attend in ideologic groups. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... expressing your idea freely has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'freedom'.
Suggestion: freedom
...;. It is a widely held view that having a freedom of expression in the society is highly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, in addition, no doubt, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15699658703 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89433076519 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 139.433497537 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61433447099 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.3914727929 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.363636364 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213694419457 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07499226537 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655824771534 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125394183429 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594305910617 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.