The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In the given statement, author argues that the passionate ideas in commonplace thing leads for the arising of the best ideas for the same. The statement seems to be justified as most of the ideas that had lead to the revolution had been arised from the passionate interest of the thinker in the field . So, the statement has a valid point.
The main reason to agree the author's point is that there are many examples in the history which proves the statement. Any revolutionary ideas, concepts and trends that has arised has been from the passionate minds of the field which take over the world like a storm. when any one is passionate about something that leads him to more indulging in the same and generate more curiosity in that leading to the solving of that which gives the best idea to the world which brings the revolutionary change in the world.
Moreover, The world has witnessed a large quantity of examples in all the field. Be it science and technology or any cultural or any other field. the people with the passionate minds had brought a considerable change in the field and commonplace thing. Let us consider the example of Albert Einstein, the biggest passionate minds of the field of science. His passion towards nuclear science had brought a lot of revolutionary changes in the field. Also one can consider the example of mathematician S Ramanujan, his love for equation had brought a considerable number of equation which are true practically but they had no proof. Which is even today not available even after long time of his death.
However, sometimes some impassionate minds also generate some amazing ideas which changes the face of world or the way which we look to that field. There are many examples in the past the some people without indulging much give the best of the result which some amazing brains can also not get. may be by hook or crook but the final result is what which matters.
Also, there are many people from other field that had generated the best by their passionated minds namely Elon musk, Christopher Nolan etc. these people had given some amazing result from their curiosity towards their field
At the end, it can be concluded that the statement given by the author has a good point because the best ideas arise from deep curiosity and deep curiosity arises from the passion toward the commonplace thing which gives the best product to the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 417.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78657074341 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46982197818 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429256594724 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4484094573 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.888888889 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05555555556 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203950739593 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073788002753 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524733010218 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127454866714 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596954582098 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.