Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The accuracy is essential to our progress and well-being in the contemporary era. Working slowly to ensure everything is right is a service that is especially vital to the prosperity of a work. Therefore, in today’s world it is more important to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct than work quickly and risk making mistakes because that will save time and money.
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that working with caution will finish tasks rapidly. In fact, employees require many hours to check and correct mistakes which happen from working rapidly instead of giving them a chance to improve and enhance themselves. So, working slowly is the single greatest determinant of the work success. However, making mistakes will make the work environment inconvenience because employs whom doing different tasks rapidly lack the ability to concentrate on the most important things which support work improvement. Consequently, they do not have time to stimulate their creativity.
Another point why I advocate the importance ensuring the accuracy of our duties is very important to save money. Complete everything without any mistakes can provide starting point from which the company can develop clear target objectives to enhance the company budget. Thus, the person must focus on the most important and the time-consuming things instead of doing many things rapidly. For example, the company which produce high quality of products will attract many people to bye their products. Eventually, the company can increase the salary of its employee and spend more money to enhance their knowledge to make great things.
To sum up, increase the concentration in the work has great impacts on the job and many advantages. Hopefully, each company will recognize it significance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in fact, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32638888889 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78124783257 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548611111111 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1268877468 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.266666667 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326991014539 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103070791171 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130884380924 0.0737576698707 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202986178279 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156109206534 0.0645574589148 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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