Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.
The world is a complex place to live. We should be able to handle our lives in different situations. Learning fact plays a vital role in our life, but only if we have learned some ideas and concepts we would be able to face the facts with all of our power. So, I agree with the statement.
Learning new ideas of our world in our family or discussing some uncommon concepts about the life can prepare us to make some logical decisions in facing to some facts. As an example, we wouldn't be able to cure a sick person as a doctor, if we didn't learn some treatment in similar situations. So, medical universities have played a significant role. Managing a company in difficult conditions and handling a plane as a pilot are also another examples that clarify us the importance of having the powerful concepts.
There are some famous scientists who show the power of concepts and brilliant ideas to people. Sometimes having a special idea for humans' life or for improvement of the world is enough to introduce you to the world. Although those ideas may not be practical in your times, in future it would be one of the facts of the people's life. I can mention some books of writers which unlike the past are known at this time.
To sum up, I mentioned the importance of experiencing the facts of our life. The facts are so effective on the elaborating our ability for life, but this improvement wouldn't be possible if we didn't prepare ourselves for some ideas and special concepts. We should get ready in this complex world to convert all the facts to some pleasant experiences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: wouldn't
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Suggestion: peoples'; people's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, as to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 283.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57597173145 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57886627449 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526501766784 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8252720183 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162750702244 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613757645353 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679688636687 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109308311018 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245529472468 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.