Some people become famous at young age. Is it good thing or bad thing?
These days, popularity is achieved at an early age for certain people. It is argued by many that such thing can be advantageous while others believe that it has drawbacks. In this essay, I will point out to why it brimgs more disadvantages.
Film stars, athletes and artists who become famous at a very young age spend their entire childhood at rehearsals, sports practices or in studious. They have to work day and night to make themselves better, as we all know popularity doesn't come without hardworks. As a result, school time is compromised as they barely have time to attend classes, take exams or even finish school. Some statistics have analysed that 60% of famous stars have abandoned education at primary level itself because they have to choose work over that. Therefore, sacrificing education,which plays a vital role in today's life, to attain popularity is certainly detrimental to children's.
Secondly, becoming a celebrity early can at some point spoil the child. These people have many fans and followers and they receive high respect and importance by society. Also, many companies sign big contracts with them, giving them high pays at the end of each work. These children live a luxurious life at an early age and they know that money is never a problem. Mannerism and certain principles of life are not taught to them. For example, there are many leaked online videos revealing how young superstars are spoiled due to fame and money. They do not have respect to their parents or elderly people and they can easily throw tantrums when their needs are not satisfied. So, high prestige or reputation should not be given to children.
To conclude, I think that it is most definitely not ideal to let young people taste the effects of popularity too early in life since school education and successful principles of life are obstructed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94568690096 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64291995254 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61661341853 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.691876311 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0588235294 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203914783532 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552254991184 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600581257557 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107543431513 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267020106823 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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