Homeschooling
A lot of kids do not like going to schools. Either they do not like to learn, or they do not like the other students who go there. That is why homeschooling has been brought up many times, whether someone’s friend experiences it, or parents insists upon it. With the economy suffering and some of the kids at school having a hard time fitting in, home schooling seems like the perfect solution. But when you really look at the situation, it is really not good. In my opinion, homeschooling is not good for children for two reasons.
The first reason is that the child will have no one to socialize with other than their siblings and parents. Many parents are afraid on their children from the violence that happens in school or fights between students. All schools are not violent and parents can choose the right schools for their kids before letting them study. Also, if every child is homeschooled, children will not be able to make any friends. “Homeschooling limits socialism”. When children are homeschooled, they will not be able to interact with other kids their age which will make it hard to prepare them for real life.in today's society, some parents thinks that homeschooling helps with the safety of their children but your home could also be a shackle for them to experience the real world.
Secondly, children needs an appropriate academic education which will allow them to prosper in a way that will not limits them in the future. Some parents thinks that they might be the best teacher for their kids. But in fact, they should not homeschool their children, since educational background is an essential aspect when it comes to teaching, parents will not be able to give a an appropriate standard. Sometimes parents excel at subject. Hence, they believe it will be better for them to tutor their kids. But exceling in one subject does not mean that he excel in all the curriculum and thus children will not get what they need in future study’s.
In conclusion, deciding to home-school your child is not the best idea. When it comes to learning or making friends, leaving the student in school and letting them deal with their problems is better than pulling them out.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65992496718 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502631578947 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4353805065 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.15 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116055430647 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449523096294 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842495294751 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729997687157 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514292548739 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.