Scientist predict that all people will chose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think positive or negative development?
It is begun 21 at century. We can consider different countries in the world and the have own mother language. A day scientist will predict all people talk to the one language in the world. In my opinion, it's very helpful to talk another countries people. I completely agree that situation.
It is first necessary to explain, world has different European countries and Middle East countries etc... Now a days most people to use to talk And every people respect in English language. Explicitly, British cousin issues different types of exam. Therefore we want to abroad, you have to do immedietly these types of exam. However English language is used all countries in the world.
In addition, it's very helpful to do our day to day work and very important thing is we can face all exams in the one language. A further point is we can business with all countries one language. All types of goods will be produced in the same language. And we won't to exchange the money in the world. All countries will be used same currency in the world. Admittedly, I think we won't face the different trouble in the future.
In conclusion, I think it's very good engender in our future prediction said by scientist. All people talk one language will be better for us and drawbacks will be deterred. In future we will face to the sublime things. And obviously, all people's will work busy as a bee . And lots of matters will be reduced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, therefore, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65079365079 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56900577159 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480158730159 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4350552391 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.8095238095 106.682146367 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271783279994 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868851675063 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897044634391 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178285139381 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052753602537 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.8 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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