You Borrowed an important text books from a classmate Last term. You now realise your classmate has returned home Overseas and you still have to book write a letter to him apologise for the mistake
find out how important the book is to him
say wat you will do
Dear Smitha
I hope everything is fine on your side because it has been so long since I have remained in a contact with you. I am inscribing this letter to say sorry for my fault that I was unable to return my book which I have borrowed from you last year
I have taken a loan of a book named as 'Principles of management' which is written by the DS Deol for the preparation of my exams during my semester. This book has really proved helpful for me to obtain good marks in my exams and yesterday, when I cleaned up my room, I found that book laid on my study table. On the same day, I made a call at your mobile, but someone else had picked up my call and informed me that you had left for your home in Australia last month
Now, please let me know how much this book is significant for you? if you really need this book on an urgent basis I will not mind to send it to you back through express mail.In contrast, if this book has no further vital for you,could it be possible to send it by ordinary mail, because it would cost me alot if I Will send it by express mail due to its heavy weight. If you say I can pay the amount of the book in your account
I am looking forward to hear from you soon and do not hesitate to say anything else you wish.Pay my regards to your parents.
Yours truly
Smaira
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... much this book is significant for you? if you really need this book on an urgent ...
^^
Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... much this book is significant for you? if you really need this book on an urgent ...
^^
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind sending'.
Suggestion: mind sending
...this book on an urgent basis I will not mind to send it to you back through express mail.In ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...end it to you back through express mail.In contrast, if this book has no further v...
^^
Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , could
...f this book has no further vital for you,could it be possible to send it by ordinary m...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 357, Rule ID: HEAVY_WEIGHT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'heavyweight'?
Suggestion: heavyweight
...Will send it by express mail due to its heavy weight. If you say I can pay the amount of the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 371, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y express mail due to its heavy weight. If you say I can pay the amount of the boo...
^^
Line 9, column 23, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...n your account I am looking forward to hear from you soon and do not hesitate to sa...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Pay
... hesitate to say anything else you wish.Pay my regards to your parents. Yours tr...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 32.9175257732 173% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 261.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.08812260536 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15183820418 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570881226054 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 16.3608247423 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.8247727296 44.8134815571 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.428571429 76.5299724578 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2857142857 16.8248392259 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361666826695 0.216113520407 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162811608355 0.0766984524023 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074278154741 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227674859877 0.12726935374 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672459101511 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 8.37731958763 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.03 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 8.54432989691 197% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 8.15463917526 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.