The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The given bar graph illustrates the proportion of Australian male and female in the various groups of age who used to do physical exercises in 2010.
An overall trend, the youngest male did the physical activity more than the youngest female. Conversely, the older women engaged physical activity more than the same group of men.
For the male, the age group from 15 to 24 did activism that accounts 52.8%. Whereas, the rate declined significantly to 39.5% for age group 35 to 44. Moreover, the proportion increased to 46.7% for men aged 65 and over.
With regard to females, the percentage of activism for aged 15 to 24 was 47.7%, which was less than the same age group of males. However, the proportion went up steadily to 53.3% for females aged 45 to 54, which was more than by 10.2% for the males aged the same. Likewise, for age group 65 and above, the percentage was 47.1%, which was more than by 0.4% for the same level of males.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, likewise, moreover, whereas, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57396449704 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38601717795 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514792899408 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2449602191 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8888888889 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.23603664747 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275718755925 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13706593609 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670983396384 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190502771358 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527432639205 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.