You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Estimable Manager,
I wanted to express my appreciation for the immaculate arrangements and superior service received at your magnificent hotel on my aunt 90th birthday.
The place was less noisy and melodious classical music with dim lights ambiance made the atmosphere warm and cozy. Since the event was attended by most of the elderly people, they loved such calmly environment. The waiters were professional and polite particularly Mr. John have been impassioned and cooperative sorting out much and take care of our requirements.
However, party was thrown so that aunt adolescence companions got a chance to see one another following a significant number quite some time. They might not stop discussing those times from claiming their youth, at they might meet every day.
The quality and presentation of the food provided was remarkably committed and everyone feel gratified. The same dives with those beverages served to lodging at the right temperature to expend for full delight. Although the deck was bit uneven which I noticed but it was ignorable.
Please accept my gratitude, and extend my regards to your staff.
Yours Faithfully,
Ali
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- You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your lettergive the details of the partythe reason why the party was 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lights'' or 'light's'?
Suggestion: lights'; light's
... and melodious classical music with dim lights ambiance made the atmosphere warm and c...
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Line 4, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir youth, at they might meet every day. The quality and presentation of the food...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...for full delight. Although the deck was bit uneven which I noticed but it was ignor...
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Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n which I noticed but it was ignorable. Please accept my gratitude, and extend m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33879781421 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85576510039 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.75956284153 0.547539520022 139% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9791267853 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8181818182 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162296050613 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486480980995 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417179047173 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677646690192 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361322875409 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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