Write a paragraph about the following statement: "The use of computer technology will totally change the way we communicate in the future"
No one can deny that computer have made communicating for easier and much faster. In my point of view, it will continue modifying the way we communicate in the future. As far as I know, the internet allows people from all over the world to chat to each others online. What's more, it is cheaper than making a phone call. More and more people are using emails or sending text messages than letter writing. Because it takes much time to receive and reply. Many support the view that the use of computer technology is appropriate and convenient. According to one article, three-quater of population all over the world use apps such as Facebook, Instagram, or Snapchat on the computer to keep in touch with their friends and family. My friend who studies aboard said: " When I have space time, I fully spend time to using computer to chat with my family through camera's computer". I suppose, the invention of computer technology is a modern revolution for people. All in all, I believe that we will see even more developments in any time soon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...he world to chat to each others online. Whats more, it is cheaper than making a phone...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, i suppose, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 184.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70108695652 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65657488561 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641304347826 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3290841427 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6363636364 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208066877029 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704766084999 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602356120035 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208066877029 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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