You’ve recently found an object and you think that it might be of some historical value. Write a letter to the director of the museum asking for some information on the object.
- Give a description of that object.
- Tell them where you found it.
- Ask for information you are seeking.
Dear sir/Madam,
I’m writing to ask for some information about a vessel I found out in my garden. I guess it might be of some historical value. The vessel is silver with some golden flowers on it. There are some beautiful and colorful jewelries on the handles of this vessel. Although it is covered with dust and mud and there are some cracks on it, it still seems valuable.
2 weeks ago while I was digging my garden in order to plant a tree I found this object. I surf the net to find some information about similar objects to find out what century it belongs to but I could not find any useful information. Please give me some information about the era it belongs to and what is the approximate value for it. Do not hesitate to call me on my cell phone o912… or via my email, R@yahoo.com.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully
Rahi Honarvar
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