The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

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The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

Given are the charts providing statistical information about the alterations in distribution of overall spending of an undetermined school across three decades. From an overall prospective, teacher’s income was marked as the main part of total spending whereas the smallest share related to insurance expenses in both years.

It is apparent that, although there was a slight decline in the interim, an overall improvement on the figures for teacher’s salaries was observed during 30 years. Other workers’ salaries were marked as the second biggest proportion and gradually plummeted by 6 % an...

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