Many people are afraid to leave their home because of crime.Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime.While other feel that little action can be done to stop crime.What is your view.
A convincing agruement is that crime is such on high rate nowadays due to less strictness to criminals. Many think that some hard steps should be taken but other oppose this idea. Let us discuss different factors related to this one by one in further paragraphs.
To begin with,this high rate of crime affects our society very badly. Firstly,many people are not able to leave their house at any rate because criminals are always ready to perform their activity, like criminals are always addicted to drugs and target to normal people. Secondly, this modern technology also affecting crime rate very badly such as criminal have techiniques to trace the mobile phones and hack everything easily as it is happening nowadays.
On the other side,it is very neccessary to take some steps,For instance, if a criminal caught one time then put them to prison or give capital punishment.Moreover, nowadays camera's would be very benificial as it can record everything so,criminal get afraid to do anything.This would be affect positively to decrease the crime rate.
Moving further,I think that the best way to decrease the crime is to change the mentality of criminals.Such asif a criminal caught once instead of sending to prison, send them to awareness camps and try to wash their mind and tell them the of crime and put them to do social work
To draw the conclusion, I support the idea to decrease crime everyone have to contribute in it, as a single person or only goverment is not able to do anything easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i think, such as, at any rate, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92578125 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80500030898 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.23032481 49.4020404114 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.625 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.875 7.06120827912 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206558408108 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881057023007 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457100058561 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10818853171 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278771453676 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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