Some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open are of town and cities than to built more housing.To what extend do you agree or disagree
The presence of trees is lucrative to maintain neat and clean enviorment.Some assert that planting trees are more benificial for our surrounding instead of buliting new houses.I think that in this modern era both the idea are important.Let us disscuss factors related to importance of plants and new houses one by one in further paragraphs.
To begin with,in this present society the living standred is improved as compared to in past and everyone ignored the importance of trees.Firstly,as much as increased the number of trees affects our health positively because trees release oxygen gas in enviorment and in this era population isincreasing on such a high rate.It is neccessary to plant more trees in empty space of town.
On the other hand,the thinking and living standred of humans is improved so everyone wants luxryious accomodation and wants to live sepratily as the the number of apartment are required.Moreover population is incresing day by day it also affects like more houses are required and it obuiously builted in the empty speces of
cities.
Movingfurther,the best solution to solve this problem is to built houses in a system like in colonies a large number of houses are builted in less space.Besides it plant tress in the sides of roads and in gardens make a proper balance of enviorment.
In conclusion,this problem should be solved definitely,if everyone contribute in it and do everything with a system
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, i think, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18025751073 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19676520544 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557939914163 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.2079828586 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 241.4 106.682146367 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.6 20.7667163134 224% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 7.06120827912 312% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181192487598 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877478233286 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442301952318 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087933446987 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441654521774 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.3 13.0946893788 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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