The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems... so who do u think should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organisations or each individual?
Nowadays, our environment is facing various problems affecting our health, productivity and peace. These problems are varied between over-population, high traffic and the pollution as well. Some people believed that only the governments are the responsible entities to solve theses issues while others argue that they are the responsibility for all entities as long they are living at the same area. In my point of view, I am totally inclined that all sectors should be united to solve theses troubles.
First of all, individuals should cooperate to assist in solving the pollution problems by different means. Car pooling will contribute in 70% of the surrounding troubles, as it will reduce the number of the used cars hence, it will decrease the pollution in the atmosphere, avoid the traffic congustion and finally it will reduce the number of population. People also can help by avoiding throwing the personal wastes in the rivers, streets and in public places.
Secondly, the government has deadly contribution in applying strict rules to those who through their stuffs in public places, who use gasoline in their cars that are not following the announced specifications. Without the aid of the governments, nothing will be achieved as they oblige people to follow their rules due to their high authority.
In my opinion, all parties need to be engaged to solve the different problems that are confronting our environment.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion profounds the view that due to the various problems that are facing our environment, it's mandatory to engage all parties to have a final resolution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27307692308 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92953487028 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7770112794 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.636363636 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.25397266985 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156106320404 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583443692576 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404718417219 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776722783385 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318837836119 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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