You need to study climate change. Which aspect of climate change will you choose and why? Use examples.
Nowadays, climate change has become a serious problem to our planet. If I were chosen a specific field of study, I would go for greenhouse effect. This essay will outline causes and effects of greenhouse effect and how it can be tackled.
To start with, although climate change has numerous reasons, the green house effect is considered as the main one. It is caused by the excess emission of car fumes, harmful gasses from factories, and the emission of carbon dioxide released into the earth atmosphere. Therefore, that makes it clear why the green house effect is the best area to choose to study the climate change.
Furthermore, doing more research about the greenhouse effect will help to find ways to combat the problem. After knowing the reasons of this phenomenon, it will be much easier to find ways to reduce it's harmful effect. For example, after studien the effect of car fumes on the global warming, more solutions to the climate change problem can be found, so it is believed that this particular branch should be studied more.
In conclusion, global warming is a detrimental problem with tremendous negative ramifications, and several causes . As such, since the greenhouse effect is one of the main reasons, I would prefer to discover it more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...gative ramifications, and several causes . As such, since the greenhouse effect is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95774647887 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58576361351 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582159624413 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.71428571429 350% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9552251973 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143891866419 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619074079922 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736197133252 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856727939868 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612367655093 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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