Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sports such as football, which need multiple players are considered advantageous by a few individuals. However, there are others who contradict this view and believe solo sports such as tennis and swimming have superior advantages. In my opinion, both sport types possess their own merits but selection should solely be the player’s choice.
Some agree that sports like football, which require team play have proven to be more advantageous because team play helps players in developing captaincy, leadership, communication, team work skills and a sense of healthy competition among players, thereby helping them to give their best on the field.
Nevertheless, there are others who claim that solo sports are of greater advantages as they require no partner, hence the person is not bound in any aspect and does not have to rely on others for finalizing date, time or venue of the game. Moreover, a person can play in his leisure time to release his stress or anxiety.
In my opinion, both individual and team sports have their own positive aspects but whether an individual want to be a part of a team or play alone is solely their choice depending upon various factors. Team play not only provides emotional support to all of the its team members but also help them socialize and polish their player skills. On the other hand, sports played individually boosts self- confidence, personal capabilities and helps players to come up with new and unique strategies to win the game. Besides, when doing sports individually, people are liberated from the constraints of following rigid plans resulting in higher sense of satisfaction.
In conclusion, I believe that both team and solo sports have their own merits in cultivating player’s personal and professional skills but the benefits attained by them depends upon the player’s skills, interests, dedication and satisfaction levels.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28289473684 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87158806334 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582236842105 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4900666092 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222165166844 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862103322298 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420413353103 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11970444062 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510609721873 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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