Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time jobs and see it as a good thing , while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views.
Part-time job is an opportunity for students to earn money besides their university or school lessons. It has been a controversial topic whether adolescents should do a part-time job or do not. Some countries permit students labor, while others do not.
On the one hand, part-time job is an acceptable thing to do because students will comprehend about work and lay a foundation of their future career. Besides that, for students who are under the poor financial condition it is a probability to pay their costly tuition fees. In addition, person can get a satisfaction of their work if their working condition is enjoyable and give the fellow feeling to their employees.
On the other hand, pupil might face with an issue not apprehending the current lesson. In addition, due to overwork during night time, they might encounter to physical diseases such as insomnia, eye-sore and other more. Further, working for long hours may lead to serious psychological illness exemplification of depression and anxiety.
Overall, I am convinced that teenagers are ought to do part-time jobs. As long as they intend their work and study elaborately it is sure not insurmountable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, so, while, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13612565445 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98679971894 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643979057592 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4988038026 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.1818181818 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164022217603 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670480670228 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581495878903 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995114469007 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533358122447 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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