Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?
Entertainment plays an important cpart in everyone's life. In the past, the artists were paid very leass, but in the present days, entertainers are charging huge amount vfor their performances. I totally agree with the notion that artists are getting a large amount of money. This essay will analyse the cause of it and discuss the other professions which will be paid more.
First of all, the celebrities like film actors, musicians and sports stars are paid according to their fame. For instance, Shahrukh khan, charged huge amount of money for doing a single film. The directors pay and sign him with the hope that movie will run well, as he is very famous among tge common people. Moreover, artists are being offered so much money for doing a simple ten to fifteen seconds advert as well, which is actually a total waste of money, because they are being paid to much in comparison to the job they are doing. Also, they charge for any visit to a marriage party or any social functions which is totally useless.
Besiding investing the money on these celebrities, more payment should be given to other job professions, such as, doctors, who are actually serving the society and saving a life. Also, the salary of teachers should be hiked, as they are the one who builds the future generation for the nation. Last but not the least, the armed forces person, the one's vho are saving the masses from violence and danger by putting their lives in danger.
In conclusion, it is reckon that people from entertainment industry are overly paid these days. I strongly believe with the opinion, since entertainers are not basic needvof human beings. So, the authorities should revised the wages for other noble job proffesions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'forces'' or 'force's'?
Suggestion: forces'; force's
...tion. Last but not the least, the armed forces person, the ones vho are saving the mas...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reckoned'.
Suggestion: reckoned
...ives in danger. In conclusion, it is reckon that people from entertainment industry...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85762711864 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45095294801 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6602128335 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291476452253 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853718314943 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630854524828 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15967790866 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045661663578 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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