Some people believe that young people should have university education, because this will bring benefit to the society. Others, however, believe that it will lead to graduate unemployment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Education lays down the foundation of successful career for everyone. Presently, some people reckon that university education holds a great significance and young people should be stimulated towards the tertiary level of education. By contrast, others believe that this practice will accelerate the number of unemployed graduates. Here, I would like to account for both sides with my own perception.
There are numerous points to support the former view. First and foremost, university education opens the door for young people to accomplish a plethora of job opportunities in diverse fields. To ...
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Essay evaluation report
the contribution of university education in overall development and looking for success in many other fields in matchless.
Description: what is the verb for this sentence?
a greater emphasize
Description: Definitions of emphasize
verb
give special importance or prominence to (something) in speaking or writing.
he jabbed a finger into the tabletop to emphasize his point
is far more greater than
is far more great than
is far greater than
it is prime duty of government
it is the prime duty of government
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flaws:
1. No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
2. Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short. Try to develop some compound/complex sentences.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 390 350
No. of Characters: 2073 1500
No. of Different Words: 221 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.444 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.315 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.883 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 170 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 130 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 92 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 68 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.571 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.246 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.268 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.485 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.024 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Job
...e rise of unemployment among graduates. job sectors are already flooded with job s...
^^^
Line 6, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nemployment among graduates. job sectors are already flooded with job seekers aft...
^^
Line 6, column 313, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the parents') or simply say ''most parents''.
Suggestion: most of the parents; most parents
...al life example of my county, in India, most of parents expect their children to become doctors...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 521, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'greater' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: greater
...duates looking for the same jobs is far more greater than the ratio of people searching for ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, look, second, so, therefore, well, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2137.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47948717949 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97500987573 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.70449673 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1363636364 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204712597086 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559688964105 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541119427891 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112187227712 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669303616764 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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