People learn in different ways. Some people learn by doing things, other people learn by reading about things, others learn by listening to people talk about things.Which of these methods of learning is best for you? Use specific examples to support your choice.
Indeed learning is ongoing process everyday we learn something new from multiple sources. Some are visual learners, while others are auditory learners. However I learn by doing things such as kinaesthetic and proprioceptive.
My own experience is compelling example of this. My professor of science taught an experiment about the depth of soil for growth for germinating seed when I was in 7th grade. Moreover, I applied that in order to reminder it for long time as a result i still remember that concept. I cleared my science exam with flying colour. From the very young age, I was fond of performing experiments by my own and imaginary to convert short term memory to long term. As a consequence, that habit serves as boon or me during my school life I understood physics and scientific principle by practical application. On the other hand, when I tried to learn by reading information I usually loose connections between the sentence and unable to summarise after reading long paragraphs. Being annoyed by reading from formal book, I acclimatised with different strategy of learning. For instance, when I was in seventh grade, I was learning concept of laws of motion by reading from the text. After some time I was distracted from reading and eventually scored low in physics in class examination. Later on, I score highest grades after acquiring knowledge when scrutinising motion of car.
Another example which requires attention is when I was in college final year of Physical Therapy College; I attended seminar to learn mulligan techniques. However, I did not understand completely the principles of mobilisation while reading those. After I practised those mobilisation techniques on my friends and my mother I learned it thoroughly. In addition, I gained confidence when they provided positive feedback at the end of mobilisation. Thus, I acquired that skill by manipulating on other subjects and used extensively during my practice as physical therapist. Not only this, but also that skill turned out to be very effective in restoring patient’s lost accessory mobility of joints. Fortunately, being impressed by expertise in useful mobility techniques, my employer rewarded me with salary raise and promoted me to managerial administrative position for an outpatient clinic.
To sum up, it is worth saying that gaining skill by performing is indeed proficient way of learning. For learning specific skill related to occupation and to apply bookish laws and concepts in practical life it is is imperative to attain efficiency by performing task. Indeed, in most of schools teacher adapt this form by assigning projects to the group to bind children’s attention to the formal study material.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2287.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24541284404 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06590471057 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584862385321 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 715.5 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1995370342 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2916666667 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184715254604 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515959086225 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558300019234 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127510330687 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632052559014 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 86.8835125448 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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