the bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women doing different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The given bar chart clearly presents information about the percentage of men and women in each 6 age group (age 15-24, 25-34, 35-44, 45-54. 55-64, and 65 and over) doing regular physical activity in 2010. Overall, it is evident that people between 25 – 64 years old, there were similar trend. Meanwhile, other 2 groups (young people and elderly people) were totally different.
In the detail, it can be explained that aged from 25 -64 years old, females enjoy regular physical activity more than males. The number of females doing regular physical activity in 4 groups at about 52%, while the figures of males enjoying this activity at around 42%. On the other hand, there were a larger number of teenager men doing physical activity than that of teenager women (age from 15-24 years old), or at 52.8% and 47.7% respectively.
Finally, it is interesting that there were almost as many retire men doing this activity as that of retire women doing regular physical activity, or at about 46.5%
- the chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. 73
- the bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women doing different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 73
- Large city and small town 73
- large city or small town 78
- Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a large city versus lining in a small town Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87573964497 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3077226519 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562130177515 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8894361927 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338602379637 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151521806809 0.103423049105 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865468144128 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235817835286 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220766474242 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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