Competitiveness is a skill that is required in order to succeed. How does competitiveness affect the individual? Is it positive or negative?
Competitiveness is a skill that illustrate one's tenacity to what they want. Nowadays, under the impact of many factors such as, over population as well as peers who walk ahead of, establish a strong competitiveness skill to people. Glanced at the strong resilience of people, it i concluded that competitiveness influence to mankind negatively in many ways.
First of all, probably, over tenacity leads to conflict with your friends. Suppose that you compete with your best friend, and both of you will try to win despite friendship. However, you have to comprehend that close relationship is worth more than your win. Winning in competition is just a temporary thing, while, your beloved friend will stay with you for the rest of your life.
More importantly, negative impact of competitiveness is being unfold on friends and families of person. Hard working students, or workers perhaps ignore their beloved ones in order to succeed. Whereas, people who had not put all of their effort to sole on study or work, will have a time to observe the real life meaning and spend his/her valuable time with loved ones. Once Jack Ma, CEO of Alibaba company, said that students who were average in studying had a time to observe other things than studying and in future they will succeed without a doubt. Moreover, the one who is special to you may have a serious disorder, or perhaps pass away suddenly due to many factors and that is the spectacular example of not devoting more time with your friends or family. As a consequence, you will end up regretting for your action.
By way of conclusion, some may argue that competitiveness is only way to survive and succeed in modern world, in my view, however, it have a cross impact in human being from many perspectives. People may lose their valuable time by chasing to successful life and ignore their family and friends, as well as over resilience create a break between best friends. Whereas, if you balance your daily working time and time that you have to spend in family, you do not have to be over competitive in order to succeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, such as, as well as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81058495822 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71994124932 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529247910864 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9326528055 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.9375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145484053628 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589967177604 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603432049221 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10342356856 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626367405354 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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