The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. While a report for university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graph gives information about the amount of wheat export in Australia, Canada and European Community over a five-year period.
Australia rose slightly from 1985 in 15,000 million of ton to 1986 under 20,000 million of ton. Between 1987 and 1990 Australia wheat export decreased gradually from 14,000 million of ton to 11,000 million of ton. In contrast, the amount of wheat export in European fell by 2,000 in 1986 and then gradual rose to 21,000 million of ton in 1990.
On one hand, Canada was the higher wheat exports than the other countries in 1985 with 19,000 and then they fell by 3,000 million of ton in 1986. Between 1986 and 19888, Canada was an increase of 9,000 from 16,000 million of ton to 25,000 million of ton, and then dropped to 14,000 million of ton in1989. However, their amount rose dramatically from 1989 to 1990. Also Canada peaked at 25,000 in 1988.
Overall, Australia, Canada and European have strong competition to wheat export from 1985 to 1990.
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Canada was an increase of 9,000 from 16,000 million of ton to 25,000 million of ton, and then dropped to 14,000 million of ton in1989.
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