With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not close as they used to be, Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.
Although Leo Tolstoy believes that "all happy families are alike; each unhappy family is unhappy in its own way, in a generation spoon-fed romanticism it is unchallenging to pin down such problem sources. having thousands of children wounded and millions of families separated, divorce has become increasingly worrisome phenomena.
Since the strife and deception often associated with legal regime of divorce is eliminated divorce has become more acceptable as normal part of life, no-fault divorce gutted marriage of its legal power to bind husband and wife, allowing one spouse to dissolve the bond for any reason, consequently increase those who are divorced against their will. More importantly, wedlock were looked at through the prisms of duty, obligation, and duty, yet the psychological revolution's focus on individuals' fulfillment and personal growth changed that, thus, those who felt they were in unsatisfying martial relationship felt obligated to divorce in order to honor the widespread ethic of expressive individualism and feminism.
In addition, many had jettisoned the institutional model of marriage, only to embrace the soul-mate model of married life, which express intensively by the media, not surprisingly the soul-mate is much more likely to lead couples to divorce court than was the earlier institutional model of marriage. While working-class and poor held more conservative views of divorce than their middle and upper-class, marriage is now disproportionately appealing to wealthier better-educated couples, owing to the fact that, less-wealthy couples often do not have the emotional, social, and financial resources to enjoy a high-quality spouse, so-called divorce divide.
Furthermore, as plausible solutions, reform some laws could inject a measure of sanity into the divorce policies, for instance, one-year waiting period for married parents combining with programs that educate them the calamitous consequences for their actions toward their children, since children of divorce parent faith in love, commitment, and marriage is often shattered, also, Strategies designed to strengthen family coherent especially among low-income couples, to equipping them with the relational skills that their better-educated peers rely upon to sustain their marriages could be implemented. Not to mention, none of these reforms of low alone are able to create a transformation on the quality and stability of marriage, such policy should be accompanied by changes in the wide culture, as well as entertainment industry which have to do a better job of stressing the merits of a more institutional model of marriage.
All the above is a tall order, yet reduce the incidence of divorce and strengthen family harmony is a must, should any giving society is genuinely interested in protection and improving the welfare of children, hence the unthinkable alternative is a divided nation. As Michael J.Fox put it "family is not an important thing. It is everything."
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.48453608247 267% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 26.3917525773 243% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2552.0 937.175257732 272% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 453.0 206.0 220% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63355408389 4.54256449028 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 3.78020617076 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.200310522 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 127.690721649 214% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602649006623 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 817.2 290.88556701 281% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.83505154639 381% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 41.0 16.3608247423 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.872537459 44.8134815571 348% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 232.0 76.5299724578 303% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.1818181818 16.8248392259 245% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 4.34317383033 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167876078144 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062296992718 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452900841863 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938167444427 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456778006307 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.7 8.37731958763 307% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.94 70.7449484536 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 3.82989690722 381% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 7.45979381443 290% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.26 8.71597938144 187% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.9 7.59969072165 143% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 41.2886597938 363% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 8.62886597938 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 8.54432989691 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 8.15463917526 319% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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