Some people prefer to watch live performances from their home on TV or online.others prefer to be at present the event and experience it.Discuss both ways and give your opinion?
In this modern era Technology pave the way of watching things related to their choice.Therefore,few people like to see live performances by sitting at home.whereas others prefer to go on the concert and watch it.Here I would like to discuss both views in the coming parargraph and give my own perception.
There are manifold points to shore up my my views first and foremost,Due to bussy schedule people donot have much time to present at the concert and watch.for example, they prefer to watch concert with the help of their mobile phones.Thus,It is optimum opportunity to watch live performance.furthemore,Peolpe also get chance to spend time with their family members.To examplify,They can watch live concert at home by sitting together at home and also they can share their feelings with each other.As a result,it’s offers them to get relief from stress.Moreover,With the help of idiot box they can watch repeat telecast and also clear visualization on television rather than going to watch live performance.
On the other hand,Masses get opportunity to see their favourite celebrity closely.for instance,By watching them face to face they are keenly touched with them and get motivation to do some different to get success in the life.In result,It is more lucrative to watch their performance by sitting in the audience.Last but not least,They can support their favourite stars by cheering and hooting.for example,They give astonishing performance with the help of their fans.As a result,It brings joy and prosperity in their life.
To conclude,Both sides have their own espects.But I personally believe that watching live concert on television not only entertain us but also save our precious time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36666666667 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54910873875 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548148148148 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 20.2975951904 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.921108837 49.4020404114 421% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 362.25 106.682146367 340% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.5 20.7667163134 325% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.75 7.06120827912 421% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287721259567 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180174166046 0.084324248473 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753802985825 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180174166046 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753802985825 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.6 13.0946893788 287% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.99 50.2224549098 -10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 11.3001002004 271% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.05 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.94 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.1190380762 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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