The chartes below show the average number of calories that person consumes daily in five different countries,and percentage of the adult population that was overweight in 2013 in those countries.
The given bar charts compars the information About calories prr person consume daily in five different countries in 2013
it is crystal clear that , the highest number of calory consume in usa at more than 3500 followed by Italy at 3600 .The lowest numbers of calory consume in democratic republic of congo at near about 1500.2200 callory in take india and almost 1000 calory intake uk in 2013.
probing further, in U.S.A 70years old overweight it was highest number in 2013 followed by Italy less than 70 were overweight india and democratic republic of congo defrence between 10 years in india 40 years and above are overweight in 2013 .There was more than 60 years old are overweight.
Overall ,maximum food consume in USA people were overweight in USA .Minimum calorie intake india.
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No of words: 133.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 656.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 133.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93233082707 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42347801965 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601503759398 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.660427651 43.030603864 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.666666667 112.824112599 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.3333333333 22.9334400587 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249564663035 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153716948722 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615211479235 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159205206698 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716751843042 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 13.2329268293 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.3012195122 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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