Your-have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course.
You naive find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
I am writing to bring to your attention that I can not continue part-time course as German class which I have enrolled myself on 25th October 2017 last year.
Unfortunately, I have aligned with one projects in my company. This project is very difficult to manage the timings in order to stakeholders are there in several countries. I need to work on a rotational basis and also 12 hours work per day until this project is going to complete this year end.
I know, it will be very difficult for you to consider my request during this middle of the semester. I don't expect you to pay my refund amount. I am thinking to continue this course probably to start in the next year. It will really help if accounting department can adjust my fees for the next semester.
I am really looking for your attention soon and also please accept my situation.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...est during this middle of the semester. I dont expect you to pay my refund amount...
^
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t during this middle of the semester. I dont expect you to pay my refund amount. I a...
^^^^
Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ont expect you to pay my refund amount. I am thinking to continue this course pro...
^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d also please accept my situation. Yours faithfully, ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours faithfully, John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 727.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66025641026 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61754404316 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8181173513 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198297546459 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076643700939 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435030701205 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963781066195 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544035866215 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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