Many people believe that goverment banks provide more security than private banks. some say that private banks are also reliable.discuss both views and give your opinion.
To secure the money, there is a place called bank. While some people think that government banks provide more security, whereas other's are in the favour of private banks. In my opinion, government banks will provide more reliability and security to people's money.
Nowadays,money is an important aspect of life, without it a person is nothing. So, some people think that for better security of their money they choose government banks ahead of private and I agree. Clearly, a government banks follows more secure protocol when it is all about money transfer. A person can not get money through loan easily or by doing any kind of scam, the chances are really low,just because it is operated by government itself. For instance, from the recent money laundering scam that happened in India was from the private banks. Private banks will provide more interest rate on savings but when it comes to security, government banks are best.
On the other hand, it is often believed that the one who is with higher interest rate and up to date technological equipment and also staff with good knowledge and service quality,is more secure. Private banks are the one who work independently because of that they can provide more satisfaction to the customers by not following the certain policies which are followed by government .With those sort of functionality customers do attract by them and put their money for their future.For example, a bank who is giving a personal loan with low rate will certainly attract more people. Another aspect is that a private bank can provide different schemes for opening an account with high interest rate, which also magnetize people towards it. So, with having flexible schemes and latest technologies certainly force people to convince them.
To recapitulate, while people may vary in their opinions, I think that a government banks are more secure banks although they are outdated but they have experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, sort of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.090625 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61514332482 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5125 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.4300025891 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.357142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32226597061 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139453761666 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933887667518 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233470007651 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838573495721 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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