Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.
1. Apologize for damaging the product
2. Explain what happened
3. Say how you are going to fix the issue.
Write at least 150 words.
Hi Dave,
I’m writing to let you know that the shaving machine i lend from you last week Monday to cut my hair is spoilt and I’m very sorry for that.
Let me explain in details what went wrong. When i collected the machine from you it was working perfectly but yesterday night something terrible happened. I was cutting my hair when my phone rang so I reach out for my phone not knowing my younger sister sneak into the bathroom and pour water on it. Unfortunately, when I returned, it could not be switched on again.
My mum told me there is an experienced repairer down the street than can mend it quickly. Since we have tight schedule in school today, I intend to take it there tomorrow first thing in the morning. Also, I have it in mind to purchase brand new if the repairer can’t fix it or it’s expensive to repair. I’ll bring it to your place immediately I find a solution.
Hope you understand.
See you soon,
Martin
- Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?You should use your own 78
- Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously? 67
- Television dominates the free-time for too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree? 61
- Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 11
- You bought a TV a week ago but when you got home you discovered it did not work properly... You called the customer service to report the problem you have not yet received any help.Write a letter to the company and in your letter:1.Introduce yourself2.E 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o let you know that the shaving machine i lend from you last week Monday to cut m...
^
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...xplain in details what went wrong. When i collected the machine from you it was w...
^
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: YESTERDAY_NIGHT[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'last night' is used.
Suggestion: last night
...e from you it was working perfectly but yesterday night something terrible happened. I was cutt...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61271676301 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5250259317 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.693641618497 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.744453463 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5454545455 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145385981412 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576625980656 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453705405198 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930411251854 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338587590292 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.