My fovourite room
I live with my family in a beautiful house. My house has two floors and six rooms. There are a livingroom, three bedrooms and two bathrooms. I love my bedroom most. My room is on the second floor and it's quite large. My room was painted blue which is my favourite colour. My room looks too simple with a bed next to a big windown, a bookself, a wardrobe and some plants. On the wall, I hang some pictures and photos. They are photos of my family, my friends and posters of my idols. The bookself is pink that my parents bought for me on my birthday. I set many books, comics and some interesting things such as my handmades, my birthday presents. and so on. I love my bed because it's so comfortable to sleep and relax. I often listen to music, read book, comic and fall to sleep on it. On the weekend, I spend more time with my bed than usual. The windown is also perfect. It brings light for my room, makes my room fresh and cool by wind outside. More interestingly, I love seeing the flower garden of my mom through the windown. It makes me feel peacefully. Besides, I often invite my friends to visit my house and show them my bedroom. Then, we chat together, play game, eat snack or watch films there. It's really amazing when I can have a good time with my friends in my house. I always keep my room tidy because my parents hate the mess and me too. I love my room so much and I am thankful with my parents because they built this beautiful room for me.
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| 2018-05-06 | Kim Namjoon | 56 | view |
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...nted blue which is my favourite colour. My room looks too simple with a bed next t...
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... as my handmades, my birthday presents. and so on. I love my bed because its so com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, really, second, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 24.0651302605 237% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17021276596 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3169356346 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 5.43587174349 405% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.381349405 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.0 106.682146367 46% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.75 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47089405023 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158640410608 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129080702707 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.47089405023 0.151304729494 311% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.1 13.0946893788 31% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 50.2224549098 171% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 11.3001002004 35% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.72 12.4159519038 46% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.31 8.58950901804 73% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 10.7795591182 37% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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