The local council has decided on a block of flats on the park opposite to the place where you live in. Write a letter to the editor of the local newspaper protesting against this move. Make suggestion for what people can or should do to stop this development.
Dear Sir
I am one of the residents of Friends colony. Yesterday, I read in the newspaper that the local council has planned to build apartments on the park named Botanical garden, which is just in front of my flat. I want you to publish an article against this action in your newspaper.
Firstly, there is no need to build new flats in the area as there are enough apartments which have vacancy for residency. Secondly, Botanical garden is the only park in the area which is utilised by residents of all the age groups. It is a place for children to play, youngsters to meet with their friends or go for a jogging, adults visit to refresh their mind and old people to do yoga.
If the park will be destroyed, the whole community will suffer. I request you to write about this planning in order to aware public regarding the loss they have to face so that they should stand with me to protest against the local organisation to safeguard the park. You should mention about the petition that I am initiating in your news so that people should sign it to show that they are with me in this fight and help me in preserving the garden.
I would appreciate your immediate response.
Yours sincerely
Flora Thompson
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56818181818 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45762012814 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.266666346 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3636363636 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234647599686 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687381992415 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628563342251 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114819776984 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745289769171 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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