The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the level of violent crimes in the society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is a tendency that violent contents can be seen more often in films and television recently. It is argued that whether the violent contents in media should be restricted by governments. I certainly agree with this given view, of which reasons shall be discussed.
It is the major duty for governments to ensure the security of public. However, statistic indicates that the crime rate will exaggerate when people are exposed to large amount of violent contents in their daily life since potential law-breakers might imitate criminal actions in media. Furthermore, for those who intend to break the law such as stealing or robbing, might get inspiration of how to escape from being caught from criminal cases shown in public media. Thus, these improper contents have become accomplices of offenders.
In addition, excessive contents of violence have extremely negative influence on children. As we all know, children do not have sufficient ability to distinguish right from wrong, and they are more likely to imitate behaviors seen in films and TV. For example, children like to imitate the heroes shown in the films, who have been participating in more violent behaviors. Consequently, children might think it is okay and cool to behave violently as what the heroes do in the films. Moreover, some psychological problems can be caused if children of young age are being exposed to violent contents. They might be afraid of leaving home or sleep alone because the fear of violent accidents.
In conclusion, violence in public media negatively effect on social security and stability. Therefore, governments should take appropriate measures to restrict violence in films and television in order to reduce the crime rate.
- The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 67
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- More and more people are working at home rather than in the workplaces ,Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home.Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
- Differences between countries become less evident each year Nowadays all over the world people share the same fashions advertising brands eating habits and TV channels Do the disadvantages of this trend outweigh the advantages 87
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26353790614 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79144723472 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599277978339 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4449694716 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183685695602 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635652835605 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592256905681 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123683275783 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594165529759 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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