many people think that to become a successful specialist, it is better to choose a career early in life and never change it later. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that an early identification of a career and following it unchanged is a better way to become successful professionals. I strongly disagree with this point of view.
On the one hand, it is accepted that choosing job early and keep it stable can benefits people’s career. Firstly, people who determine their only career at a very young age, have more time to train career’s required skills and stay focus to master it. For example, Roger Federer – the greatest tennis player of all time, has been taken his first shot at 3 years old, which equips him complete sets of tennis skills and contributes to his success as a world champion at 20 years old. Secondly, by remaining loyalty with the chosen job, people can not only obtain deep related knowledge and experience but also gain full trust and satisfaction from the organization, which provide them undeniable opportunities for moving up their career ladder.
On the other hand, sticking with an early and only job is not always a good choice. The first drawback is that people at an early age, cannot have competent understand the job market and their future job, therefore, their decision tend to be affected by parents. Consequently, people may find it boring and lost their motivation if they still keep walking in others’ shoes. In addition, without changing a job, workers can hardly face new challenges which should help them to discover their hidden abilities and figure out the job which they can do the best. For example, founder of world-renowned fast food brand – Harlan Sanders who only found his successful path when opening a restaurant after retiring from his whole life job - shop assistant.
In conclusion, while it is important to find a future career soon and keep it for life, I would argue that people should take consideration carefully when choosing a future career and do not hesitate to change it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 47, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
... one hand, it is accepted that choosing job early and keep it stable can benefits p...
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Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...oosing job early and keep it stable can benefits people's career. Firstly, people w...
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Line 2, column 540, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
...y, by remaining loyalty with the chosen job, people can not only obtain deep relate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73309214537 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611801242236 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.7935372113 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9166666667 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211563824212 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851316916298 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773758141044 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16177965148 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725034636582 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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