The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
The flowchart shows how bricks for the construction industry are made.
Overall, the whole bricks production process requires 6 steps. It starts with digging raw material and ends by distributing bricks to customers.
To begin with, clay is dug by a machine before entering metal grid which is used to get rid of unwanted ingredients. The final materials then fall directly into a roller. In the next stage, after being added sand and water, the mixture is put in a mound or cut by a wire cutter which forms it to bricks.
Those bricks are then moved to drying oven for 24 to 28 hours before being heat in a kiln at a moderate temperature (200 - 980). Subsequently, they continue to be fired at a higher temperature in another kiln. Once heated second times, bricks enter a cooling chamber to be cooled for 48 to 72 hours before going into packaging at the 5th steps. All of the various stages involved in making bricks have now been completed and final products are ready to be delivered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'bricks'' or 'brick's'?
Suggestion: bricks'; brick's
... industry are made. Overall, the whole bricks production process requires 6 steps. It...
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Line 4, column 343, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
... going into packaging at the 5th steps. All of the various stages involved in making brick...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63636363636 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56827980512 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676136363636 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6723777274 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169649571904 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676911173905 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589409893575 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117805043892 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056344590199 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.