Do you agree or disagree with the following statement that
Now a days people put so much emphasis on appearance and fashion
Use specific reasons and detailed examples to support your answer.
Fashion trends has been changed from several past decades. Everybody is running behind new trends and style and with the passage of time every trend is following a new spectacle trend. Now a days we have lots of varieties in clothes. Every person wants to look different and trendy that is why we have so many brands in the market. These brands are also competing with each other in order to earn more money. Fashion and good looks also become everybody's demand. I believe that people put so much emphasis on appearence and fashion. The reason why I think in this way are given below.
First of all, good appearence is a requirement of job. It is very important to dressed properly when you work for an highly reputed enterprise , not only for major companies small enterprises also wants everybody to be dressed well. For instance, If somebody go for his first interview in a track suit, it represents his non seriousness. When you go for an interview your appearence represents your personality. So, everybody should be properly dresed up. Due to this reuirment, I believe that people emphasize so much on their appearence and out look.
Secondly, As we know that in today's world people become brand conscious. They want to look good and trendy and they follow new trends like crazy. Furthermore, youth idealize the celebrities and try to copy them as well. They try to copy whatever the brands celebrities usually wear, no matter how much expensive these brands are. For example, people get crazy for Gucci, chanel etc. They feel proud when they wear these brands, and people even start competing with each other as well. So, in my point of view I think that people put so much emphasis on fashion and outlook.
In conclusion, As I mentioned that good looks is become more important for people because its a job requirement and people also idealize celebrities and expensive brands. That is why I strongly agree with this statement that today people put so much emphasis on fashion and appearance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
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Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...is following a new spectacle trend. Now a days we have lots of varieties in clothes. E...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ecome more important for people because its a job requirement and people also ideal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8231884058 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54463971635 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2843164418 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.347826087 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52173913043 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224357661799 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069996097965 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855855378871 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145873284282 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368014916232 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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