Many people these days travel far for work or spend more hours working. Does this trend have more advantages or disadvantages? What do you think about work-life balance?
Nowadays, people need to work hart to approach their goals or even reach their daily needs. Although it is apparent that each individual should make a balance in his work-life, many people have to spend long working hours at work or travel far to find a job.
As a human need, having a job even with long working hours or far has some advantages and disadvantages. First of all, by spending more time in a job an individual can get more experiences during the initial years of his work. It is appropriate and of high value for young employees or trainees. Secondly, more working hours means more mo...
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Sentence: Secondly, more working hours means more money and it is a good investment for young people to make money during their youth.
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