Some people say that saving money is a good way and other say that spending money is the best way to enjoy life. Discuss both views and your opinion.
In this modern era, parents both have to work to manage their family due to the cost of living in order that we can save some money for our future life. While others are thinking that we can enjoy our life whatever we like to live on this planet. I will discuss both analyses and solutions for this matter.
On the one hand, Grant parents trustworthy and take care of their grandchildren. Parents can leave their children with them and they can work with the peace of mind. If we think about the daycare center, then we need to spend minimum 20% of our salary so we can avoid when parents will stay with us. However, Grant parents will take up the big vital role to take care of their children. Although, parents will get influenced by them and also they will come to know that how we can manage with the family and budget to save money as well. we would not need to take tension in our life because we have made preserve life on the half of saving money.
On the other hand, Old generation people had five to ten kids. In this scenario that they can not spend more money but current situation people have one or two kids maximum in order that we can enjoy our modernized culture where we can adapt to that life. Generally, if we are locating in city culture, there is no option to save money due to cost of living and lifestyle. Nonetheless, we can spend money to acquire new knowledge that will help us to earn money as well. For instance, people who are all studying in International schools and colleges that overall cost like pay through the nose but once complete their studies that value will be very high.
To recapitulate this, people can spend a certain amount to grow their knowledge. however, we have to maintain some bank balance to manage and well grow in future not only us and will help to future generation as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...an save some money for our future life. While others are thinking that we can enjoy o...
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Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...amily and budget to save money as well. we would not need to take tension in our l...
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Line 8, column 82, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...certain amount to grow their knowledge. however, we have to maintain some bank balance ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nonetheless, so, then, well, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42352941176 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19108764131 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497058823529 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6766225251 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155291839495 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649366813701 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487550021841 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111528116612 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521672593623 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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