Communication has changed significantly in the last ten years. Discuss the positive and negative impacts of this change.
Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
In today’s technological era, communication has rapidly changed and there are countless modifications happened in the communication side in a decade and became an integral part of our society which is also affected the people’s life around the globe. These changes and modifications have both positive and negative impacts on humanity. This essay will discuss both the points, though, I believe that the pros greatly outweigh the cons.
To commence with, undoubtedly, communication plays pivotal role in both individual’s life and in society and spread the happiness among them. As technology made communication cheaper, efficient and convenient because people can connect with their loved ones through SMS, audio calls and video conferences. Technology helps them to stay together virtually even though not together physically and narrowing down the distances between diverse cultures and countries. For example: Whatsapp has all facilities, which can bring everyone together quickly on one click by sharing photographs, having audio and video calls.
On the contrary, the side effects of digital era cannot be neglected in communication sector as the protection of personal information are primarily at the risk, because of website and e-mail hacking people are worried about their confidential information becoming public knowledge, and it’s widely effecting our social life as people are forgetting importance of being social together and communicate. For instance: Facebook has become medium to connect virtually with each other but nobody bothers to have real communication with each other.
In conclusion, the forgoing discussion propounds the view that communication has brought a wide range of possibilities with itself as well as some significant drawbacks. However, the positive impacts exceed the negative ones. Even I believe that communication will grow even more to become a large solution to several problems around the world.
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| 2018-05-16 | Manisha Verma | 88 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1207.87684729 139% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75342465753 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09873793158 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 139.433497537 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 379.143842365 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.5177320591 50.4703680194 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152216606702 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064959920688 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540862161156 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099128226446 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548745058299 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 12.6369458128 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 11.5310837438 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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