Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is sometimes argued that economy should be a compulsory program in schools. While I disagree with the idea of making such program obligatory, I do believe that it is necessary to learn this type of subject.
On the one hand, business subject seems to be unessential with many students. Firstly, it is early for students to learn about finance since they need to study the basic education like life skills, communication,math, geography,... Moreover, at little age, they may not understand all the financial problems and will bring disadvantaged to them. Secondly, commercial education is complicated. Therefore, they will be dominated and this subject becomes a burden to them.
On the other hand, this compulsory subject can brings some benefit. First and foremost, this will be a foundation for students in the future because commerce is a significant thing nowaday. Most of activities have the form of trade such as advertising. Secondly, students will have knowledge to improve the income in family as they know how use money in a right way and have better life in the future.
In conclusion, financial education should be considered as a primary concern in all schools. However, in some case, it will be inappropriate to students with some reasons mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , math
...ducation like life skills, communication,math, geography,... Moreover, at little age,...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...fe skills, communication,math, geography,... Moreover, at little age, they may not...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the activities') or simply say ''Most activities''.
Suggestion: Most of the activities; Most activities
...ommerce is a significant thing nowaday. Most of activities have the form of trade such as advertis...
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Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...me in family as they know how use money in a right way and have better life in the future. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16346153846 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03637647544 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3666129389 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6153846154 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212839823677 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077229070934 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599659333595 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144520566244 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722234885559 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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