When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance.
When architects design buildings, a reconciliation between outside looks and functions should be a top priority. Many recommend that purposes of a building rather than its outward form. In my opinion, I strongly agree with that idea even though appearance is important in many aspects.
A usage of a building is probably the most basis function of how that building performs or it is literally a failed project, and in several circumstances, an appropriate design can be based on a building’s using purposes. For example, multiple universities have been constructed supported by certain locations or measurements of other figures such as population, weather, materials and so forth. A foremost goal of building universities is to deal well with educational systems that effectively matches with a performance should be more appreciated by how gorgeous they look externally.
However, an appearance also plays an essential role of making the surroundings look exquisite in general. Architecture is considered a part of art and represent for a development of those locations in a further perspective, it has become one of factors to determine living standard and relevant criteria such as economic situation, speed of development, culture and so on. For instance, a full-glasses skyscraper with a solid square design can express how modern a city it locates in.
In short, a performance of a building and its design must be integrated altogether; specifically, the intended use of a building must be significantly prioritized. It is apparent that it would consume more efforts, finance and time for achieving the job.
- When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period. 61
- When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. 61
- Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, well, for example, for instance, in general, in short, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37647058824 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36162389129 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.265894754 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.636363636 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238968390782 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080624867736 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945768096386 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135886402893 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695520074429 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.