Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations, while others believe they should get one long vacation. Give the advantages of both and express your own point of view.
There are two different attitudes to the length of school vacations. some believe that children ought to be given several short vacations. meanwhile, others think that it should be just once yearly. This essay will discuss positive points of both.
On the one hand, those who support the view of a long-time school vacation believe that if the education system considers a long vacation yearly, this will have a number of benefits for children and their families, ranging from removing extreme tiredness arising from intensive academic curriculums to helping them grow their abilities in other aspects. For example, all children need to spend some time with their families for travelling and sightseeing which both could have educational advantages for children in somewise and gain more experience. If they were given some short-time vacations, they would not have enough time for being with their households. In addition, this is obviously important to allow students to spend moments for learning some activities which are related to their interests such as painting, playing instruments, and singing. If they do not have enough free-time, they could not be really professional in these fields.
By contrast, proponents of multiple short vacations indicate that a school year with a number of relaxing time gives pupils the opportunity to be more energetic. This means that, in this situation, students would be capable of doing their assignments better than when they go to school non-stop. It is clear that they need to have enough refreshing time frequently. Furthermore, this can be useful for school staff. The principle of school would be able to address education issues periodically. Subsequently, it would be possible for them to provide practical solutions in order to improve the quality of education. For instance, if a short free-time is considered at the end of each season, addressing school-related problems will be easier as well.
Overall, it would appear that students should be given several short vacations instead of taking a long vacation as they could easily deal with their school tasks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Meanwhile
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, really, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 6.10837438424 278% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 20.9802955665 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1207.87684729 148% => OK
No of words: 337.0 242.827586207 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3115727003 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77356496416 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554896142433 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 379.143842365 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.6157635468 238% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.1705226892 50.4703680194 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.294117647 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283605707879 0.242375264174 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100822945864 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722211415124 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205005392472 0.151781067708 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773981889038 0.0609392437508 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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