few people devote their time to hobbies nowadays.put your opinion why is it so? how it is helpful to both individual and society?
Sustaining a monotonous life and accomplishing the mundane tasks lead to an acute depression. Therefore, nowadays, time is being devoted by some people to endeavor their interests, which can be attributed to the fact that pursuing the hobbies lowers the stress level. Hence, jutting positive impact on both individuals as well as society, which I will be addressing in the following paragraphs.
Initially, I would like to highlight the fact that people whose hobbies are their profession have a higher life expectancy rather than those who work to earn. Together with it, pursuing the hobbies makes people more gleeful and satisfied, as it tranquilizes their impending desires. It gives them a perfect break from their strenuous life and provides time for self-analyzation. In addition to it, it ornate the resume and personality of an individual which as result augments probability of getting hired.
However, it is not only beneficial to the individuals but also to the society as a whole, as people bonds fairly over similar interests, together with it, hobbies pave way for structuring many community events which strengthens the social bond. Furthermore, community events provide a platform to showcase one’s interest which is more piquing for both society and individual, thus, providing a podium where people not only gain knowledge but they also find new comrades. Consequently, it also provides a place for the depressed and specially challenged people to explore, as a result, they feel more integrated into the societies.
In conclusion, hobbies are an ineluctable part of an individual’s life, as it transforms a humdrum life into an eventful and lively course to stroll. Additionally, it reduces the stress of an individual as well as of a society, while, cementing the relationship of members from acquaintances to companions
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ing positive impact on both individuals as well as society, which I will be addressing in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3595890411 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14967784679 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578767123288 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6700092033 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.416666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200837337177 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706287473651 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460758580881 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117452496594 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414947429521 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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